雅思托福作文题目有吗?

雅思托福作文题目有吗?

威廉 · 李先生高端英语写作团队: 群福利: @ 各位同学,本群每天免费提供真题作文修改,严格按照 CT 雅思托福,1, 复习题的修改 (确定是否运行题),语法修改 2 个; 3 、 提炼思维去掉空话; 4 、批判性思维增强逻辑和连贯性; 5 、用地道搭配解决 Chinglish; 福利规则: 1 、周一至周五下午3点: 发送第二天的作文题目 (雅思或托福) 2 、请各位老师在第二天上午 10:00 前将作文发至小组,以便老师分析修改; 3 、第二天下午4点至 5 点,修改后的老师将修改后的段落发到群里,供大家学习; _ (0301 话题分享) Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? _ 学生版: 第一段 5 分 Some people argue that the advertising( 不要指定它。不移动不添加 the) leads to a phenomenon( 搭配不当,造成广告现象?导致后面具体不好的事情,phenomenon 的意思不够 clarity) ) that 无法特别指定 customers buy the commodity (。不要将 the, 添加到: commodities)which are not the real need of society( 不要重复写主题,更改为: out of practical value) . From my perspective, over advertisement (advertising) 更改为: (Excessive advertising campaign) might be detrimental to our life and appropriate advertising is imperative to some degree.
题目要求讨论 “商品卖得好不好,要看广告做得好不好,还是要看消费者的真实需求?”用三点定位的方法,要从 “A: 广告做得好” 和 “B 真正需要” 开始 这两个方面对讨论结果有较大的作用: C: 商品销售良好。从第一段可以预见到学生可能会跑题,下面的题目段落的内容证明是跑题。 基于学生版本的修改版本是 7 分: Some people argue that customers buy too much commodities out of practical value and this is driven by continuous advertising campaign. From my perspective, however, believe that commodities sold and consumed regularly are truthfully needed, although advertising apparently makes a great deal of sense.
8 子版本: It is true that we are increasingly surrounded by advertising by companies that want to sell us their products. To some extent I agree that advertising has an impact on sales, but I would also argue that we do need most of the goods that we buy.
(第二段) 学生版 5.5 分: To begin with, advertising always triggers impulsive and wasteful consumption.[ 中心句没有回答: 广告是如何刺激消费的】 For instance,[ 它背后的内容太大,达不到 for instance 度,既然是个例子,你就需要写具体的东西] _ in the term of _ (in terms of, 这里可以说是基于消费心理,based on/according to) consumption psychology, some retail stores will provide _ special campaign _ (promotions 商业推广,直接使用 promotions) to _ the customer _ (不要在不移动的情况下引用它,将其修改为: would-be customers) whose amount of consumption _ meets certain requirements _ (客户的消费满足一定的需求吗?如何理解?)。Some people tend to purchase _ the cheaper clothes _ (cheaper clothes, 不需要添加比较级别 the)and shoes on discount which they might not wear next season. In addition, _ myriads of sales information( 别说数不清,不可数名词: extensive information of sellers via _ on cellphone, leaflets and handouts disturb our life when people ( we, 正面为 our) want to focus on _ their _ (our) work or study. _ Therefore, over advertisement (adverting) might exert negative effects on our society. _ (本文不要求你写对社会的负面影响) _ 8 子版本: Advertisements can certainly tempt people to buy products that they might not otherwise want. A good example could be the mobile phone. Every year people can be seen queuing to buy the latest models, even when they already have a perfectly good phone that does not need replacing. Perhaps it is the influence of marketing that leads us to make these kinds of decisions; we want to stay up to date with the latest fashions or own the newest high-status device. The high sales of the iPhone seem to support this idea.
(第三段) 学生版 5.5 分: Nevertheless, I deem that the appropriate devised advertising is conducive for us to choose the commodity _ efficiently and quickly( _ 语义重复 efficiently) _ As an illustration, the personalized recommendations help us to find the products we want based on _ our online browsing history( 这场比赛非常真实,是一个额外的项目) _,which save (saves) the time we ( 添加一个副词 blindly,,以更准确地表达意思) search and select (在商品的海洋里?表达 Chinglish). Another shopping experience on double eleven carnival, (a famous community chain-store 添加 double-eleven 存储) underpins my viewpoints. People can add some indispensable goods on their shopping lists in advance and collect virtual shopping voucher online by inviting friends and classmates to join in the activities together. The _ progress( 你想表达的是 process) _ you share the information to (with) others is a sort of advertisement (可以写得更短,Sharing information with others helps make promotion ) and you ( _ 不要写第二个人 you _) can _ grab a bargain( _ 将为真实匹配添加点) _ At a deeper level, positive advertisements( advertising) play a vital role on _ the whole economic circle chain _ (调整为: whole circle of economic chain). 观点太过跳跃,怎么能一下子写到广告业? 带来更多的就业机会; 如果你想写另一个小组,你需要使用连接方式; The advertisement industry can produce a considerable source of employment for the job seekers. 本段的优点和缺点是写广告。 这一段是最严重的问题,与题目的要求无关。正宗的比赛数量不多,会加分,但是整体的观点跳跃,逻辑很差;

8 子版本: On the other hand, I believe that most people do not buy products because of the advertising alone. There are other good reasons why we make these choices, and there must be some kind of need before a person makes a purchase. New versions of products almost always have improved features that buyers may want. A new car, for example, may have greatly improved safety features, or it may be more economical to run, or it may pollute less. A new phone may allow the user to communicate more quickly or effectively, thus enhancing their quality of life.
学生版: In conclusion, under no circumstances, should we overlook the comprehensive effects _ that advertising exert on the society 。(wor嗦,需要更改为: exerted by continuous advertising campaign) . Given the reality of the modern economy, (观点太过跳跃,是空的,提炼思路是不够的。)we cannot _ avoid advertisements _ ( 修改为 avoid being swayed by advertisements _) but we should be objective and sensible on (about)it. ) 8 子版本: 建议在总结和写作中使用批判性思维的结尾,这样可以快速提高雅思写作成绩。 In conclusion, while advertising obviously influences our buying behavior, I do not agree that people make decisions that go against their real needs.
5 分 (5.125 AVE)
语法: 5.5如果你想添加 the, 一个复数是未知的,将不会使用分词短语 复习问题: 4 、本文大部分是题外话;' 逻辑: 5 、逻辑和观点跳转,句子和句子之间的衔接能力差; 单词: 6 、四个项目中整体单词是最好的。有几个亮点,比如 _ grab a bargain,online browsing history 


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Hi. I 'm Rebecca from engVid. com.Do you want to get a higher score on your TOEFL, or雅思, or TOEIC essay?

嗨,我是 engVid. com. 的 Rebbecca ,你想在托福、雅思或托业写作中获得更高的分数吗?

In the next five minutes I 'm going to show you how to do this in a really easy way.You just have to follow two easy steps.

在接下来的五分钟里,我将以一种简单的方式教你如何提高你的分数。你只需要遵循两个简单的步骤。

Take your essay question and find the key words there, and then replace them with synonyms.

看你的文章标题,找出关键词,然后用同义词替换它们。

Now, that might seem very easy and obvious, but you 'd really, really be surprised to know that lots of students don 't do that.

这可能看起来很简单,很明显,但是你会发现很多学生没有这样做,你会非常非常惊讶。

What they do instead is that throughout their essay they keep using the same words that are used in the essay question.

相反,他们在整个作文中使用与写作主题相同的词汇。

And if you do that, what you 're showing is that you don' t have a very good vocabulary, you don 't have a rich vocabulary, you don' t use...

如果你这样做,就会出现你的词汇量不好,你的词汇量不够丰富,你没用.

You don 't have many synonyms to express the same ideas and thoughts.

你不会使用许多表示相同意思和想法的同义词。

And what you need to do instead is to show off your vocabulary, and the way you can do it is to take the question,

你只需要通过确定主题来展示你的词汇,

find the key words and make sure that you can generate lots of synonyms for those key words.

找到关键词,并确保可以导出关键词的多个同义词。

Because if you can do that then you 'll use all those kind of synonyms throughout your essay instead of repeating the same vocabulary.

因为如果你能做到这一点,你可以在整个作文中使用所有这些同义词,而不是重复相同的词汇。

Isn 't it kind of a shame when you only have maybe 250 words on your雅思essay or 300 to 350 on your TOEFL essay to keep using the same vocabulary?

在雅思作文中重复使用相同的词汇,只有 250 个单词,或者托福作文只有 300 到 350 个单词。你不觉得有点惭愧吗?

Don 't do that.Learn to do something a little bit differently.

不要一直重复。学习做一些不同的事情。

Let 's see how to do it. Okay?So I' ve got a sample question, here, from the TOEFL exam.A part of the question.

让我们看看我们做了什么,好吗?我从托福考试中准备了一个样题。这是问题的一部分。

This is...This says: "Many students choose to attend university outside their home countries. "Okay?

这是.这句话的意思是: “很多学生选择在其他国家上大学。”

And maybe after that they said: “Do you agree or disagree?” or something like that.

然后可能是: “你同意还是不同意?”?"等等。

Okay? Doesn 't matter.So, what are the...?How do you find the key words?

对吗?这并不重要。那么,什么是…?你如何找到关键词?

Key words are almost any of the important words.For example: “many”。Right?

关键词是指所有重要的单词。例如,“很多”,对吗?

So if you 're going to talk about this in your essay and you' re going to give your opinion, then you want to use different words.

所以,如果你想在作文中谈论这一点,你必须给出你的观点,然后你想考虑不同的单词。

So what could you use instead of “many”?Well, try to make a list.

那么,你可以替换 “many” 什么?嗯,试着做一个表格。

For example, I made my list: “myriad students” 、 “countless” 、 “an increasing number ”。

例如,我写了我的表格: “myriad students” 、 “countless” 、 “an increasing number”。

It could be another word, it could be an expression.Anything that expresses the basic idea.

可以是其他的单词,也可以是短语。它可以是任何可以表达基本意思的表达。

And sometimes when you 're using a synonym you' re expanding on the idea, and that 's okay, too.

有时候在使用同义词的时候,你对原来的观点有一些扩展,这样就可以了。

You 're changing the idea a little bit, and that' s all right.That 's fine.

你稍微改变了一下你的观点完全没问题。没关系。

So, that was one of the key words.Second key word: “students”。

所以这是关键词之一。第二个关键词: “学生”。

If they said "students" in the essay question, don "t use the word " students" every time in your essay.

如果作文标题中有 “students”,那么不要总是在作文中使用 “students” 这个词。

Use another word, like: “pupils” 、 or “young people” 、 or “scholars”。Okay? Again, changing the meaning.

使用 “pupils” 或 “young people” 、 or “scholars” 等其他词,对吗?

“Scholar” is not exactly students, but it 's okay to use that word somewhere.

“Scholar” 不完全是学生的意思,但偶尔使用也没问题。

It also shows you have a lot of vocabulary, rich vocabulary.Next: “choose to”。 Right?

看起来你的词汇量很大,词汇量也很大。下一个是 “选择”,对吗?

Instead of saying: “.students choose to ",what else could you say?

除了说 “.{112?

You could say: “they decide to” 、 “they opt to” 、 “they prefer”。All right?

你可以说 “they decide to” 、 “they opt to” 、 “they prefer”,对吧?

So, what I 'm suggesting that you do is take some of the essay questions. Right?

所以,我的建议是,你可以挑选一些作文题目。

And when you 're practicing before the exam, just from the essay questions see if you can generate lots of synonyms for the words used in the essay question.

然后在考试前练习,只从作文题目中去看看是否能导出很多题目中使用的词汇的同义词。

If you can do that, believe me, you 're going to use those words in your essay writing.Let 's see how it continues.

相信我,如果你能做到这一点,你会在写作中使用这些词。让我们看看接下来是什么。

"..to attend 、 Many students choose to attend 、 what could you use instead of "attend"?

"..to attend "," 许多学生选择 ",你能替换" attend "什么?

You could say: “to join” 、 “to enroll in” 、 “to apply to” 、 “to pursue undergraduate studies" or “pursue graduate studies”。

你可以说: “to join” 、 “to enroll in” 、 “to apply to” 、 “to pursue undergraduate studies” 或 “pursue graduate studies”。

All right? Again, we 're changing the meaning a little bit, but it' s the same basic idea. Right?

对吗?同样,我们可能已经改变了一些意思,但是基本的想法是一样的,对吧?

Because in order to attend you need to enroll, you need to apply, etc.

因为为了上学,你必须注册,你需要申请,等等。

“Many students choose to attend university”,here 's another key word.

“很多学生选择上大学”,这是另一个关键词。

Instead of saying "university" 15 times in your essay, you might want to say: "academic centres",or "an academic program",

作文中除了说 “university” 15 遍外,还可以说: “academic centres”,或者 “an academic program”,

or “institutes of higher learning” 、 or an “educational institution” 、 or “school” 、 “college” 、 “academy”。

或 “institutes of higher learning” 或 “educational institution”,或 “school” 、 “college” 、 “academy”。

Okay? Instead of the word "university"。Don 't keep using the same word.

对吗?除了单词 “{185” 之外,不要总是使用相同的单词。

Use the same idea, but not necessarily the same word.Next.Next part, key part: "..outside their home countries ”。

使用相同的意思,但不一定是同一个词。接下来。下一部分也是关键部分: “.在另一个国家 ”。

Instead of saying: “outside their home countries” 、 say: “abroad” 、 “overseas” 、 “in a foreign country” 、 “away from their homeland”。Right?

除了说 “outside their home countries” 外,还可以说: “abroad” 、 “overseas” 、 “in a foreign” country "," away from their homeland "对吧?

Now, you don 't have to write this sentence again, but what I' m asking you to do is to take the question, find the key words, and see if you can come up with lots of vocabulary for that.

现在,你不必再写这句话了,但是我要求你做的是记住这个问题,找到关键词, 然后看看你是否能想到很多单词。

In this case, what was the topic?Education. Right?

这个例子中的主题是什么?教育,对吧?

So this way you 'll be able to check whether you have lots of educational vocabulary.

所以这是对你是否掌握了很多教育词汇的考验。

Now, I also have some other lessons and videos all about how to generate more vocabulary in certain fields.

我有其他关于如何在特定领域产生更多词汇的课程和视频。

You might want to check out some of those other videos.

你可能想看看这些课程。

They also have videos about how to use vocabulary besides "good" and "bad" {} "。 Right?So, do that.

还有一些视频,除了 “good” 和 “{220” 之外,还可以使用哪些单词?那就去看看吧

All right. Sorry, I just realized something here. "Institutions" wrote it a little too often. "Institutions",okay?That was pointed out.

好的,抱歉,我刚注意到“Institutions”,我经常写错字。“Institutions” 对吧?幸运的是,有人指出了这一点。

All right, we 're going to do one more example and then we' ll go from there.Now let 's look at another essay question. Okay?

好的。我们将看另一个例子,所以让我们从这里看一下。现在让我们来看另一个话题。

This one also comes from the TOEFL exam, but you can use questions from your雅思exam if you 're going to be appearing for the雅思.

这也是托福考试的作文题,但是如果你要参加雅思考试,你可以在雅思考试中使用这些问题。

No problem.So, it says: "A person should never make an important decision alone."

没问题。因此,它说,“人们永远不应该自己做出重要决定。"

So, what would be the key words here? Okay?

那么,这里的关键词是什么?

So they would be: “person” 、 let 's say here: “should never” 、 “important” 、 “decision” 、 and “alone” 、 so that 's what we' re going to try to find synonyms '{} for.

因此,关键词是: “person”,这里我们标记: “should never” 、 “important” 、 “decision” 和 “alone”,那么我们要做的就是努力寻找同义词。

“Person” 、 instead of saying “person” 、 you can say: “an individual”。

除了说 “person” 外,还可以说 “an individual”。

Or sometimes when you have something like this what you can do is turn it into the plural.Right?

或者有时候遇到类似的情况,可以把它转换成复数,对吧?

That will also make it much easier for you to write throughout your essay.

这将使你更容易写整篇文章。

Because when you say "a person",then you sometimes have to say: "himself", “herself” 、 “oneself”。

因为如果你说 “一个人”,那么你有时不得不说 “他自己” 、 “她自己”。

Instead of that, you can say: “people” and you just say “themselves” and you don 't have to give it a gender. Okay?

除此之外,你可以说 “人”,所以你只说 “themselves”,不需要指出性别,是吗?

Next: “A person should never” 、 so you could say instead of “never” 、 you could

say: “at no time”。Okay? 下一篇: “人永远不应该”,所以除了 “never”,你可以说 “at no time”,对吧?

"..make an important ",instead of " important ",you could use words like: “critical” 、 “crucial” 、 “significant”。

"..做一个重要的 ”,也可以使用“ important ”、“ critical ”、“ crucial ”、“ significant ”。

The point is not that I 'm giving you these words.The point is whether you can think of these words. Right?

关键不是我给你的那些话。关键是你能不能想到他们。明白吗?

These are some words that I thought about.

我想到了这些话。

If you...When you try this exercise cannot come up with even, let 's say at least two words, maybe three, ideally three,

如果你.当你试图练习的时候,你想不出至少有两三个同义词,最好是三个同义词,

but at least two words for every key word in the essay question, then you 're probably going to have difficulty in writing your essay without enough interesting vocabulary,

然而,每个关键词至少需要两个同义词,所以你可能因为没有足够有趣的单词而不得不写一篇作文, so it means you need to work on vocabulary.

这意味着你需要学习词汇。

Next: “decision” 、 you could say: “life choice” 、 “selection” 、 “determination”。

接下来: “决定”,你可以说: “life choice” 、 “selection” 、 “determination”。

And at different points in your essay use a different term.Right?

在作文的不同段落中使用不同的短语。好吗?

“Alone” 、 instead of saying “alone” 、 you could say: “by oneself” 、 “on one 's” own "," by themselves "。All right?

“单独”,除了说 “alone” 外,还可以说: “by oneself” 、 “on one 's own” 、 “by themselves”。对吗?

If you said: "People...People should never...At no time should people make significant life choices by themselves. "Okay?

如果你说 “人们”人们永远不应该永远不要自己做出关键的人生选择,对吧?

Of course, you don 't have to write the question in your own words,

当然,你不必再用自己的话来写这个问题,

but in fact throughout your essay you are going to be arguing a particular point of view for which you will need these kinds of vocabulary words.

但实际上,在你的整个作文中,你讲的是一个具体的观点,你需要的是不同的词语。

Now, if you want more tips on doing well on your TOEFL exam or on your雅思exam.

现在,如果你想了解更多关于如何做好托福或雅思考试的技巧。

If you 're doing TOEFL, check out our website: www. goodluckTOEFL. com;

如果你正在准备托福考试,请登录我们的网站: www. goodluckTOEFL. com;

If you 're doing雅思, check out www. goodluck雅思. com.

如果你正在准备雅思考试,请登录 www. goodluck雅思. com.

And on both...In both of these websites you 'll find not only tips,

在这两个.你不仅可以在两个网站上找到考试提示,

but also vocabulary that you can use on these tests and you 'll also have lots of essay questions which you can use so that you can do this exercise for yourself;

你还可以在考试中找到你将要使用的单词,以及许多你可以用来练习自己的作文主题。

And model essays where you 'll see good vocabulary, interesting, varied vocabulary, advanced vocabulary being used in actual sentences. Okay?

有更多的作文模板可以用来积累好的、有趣的、多样化的词汇,也可以用于句子的高级词汇。

So, also, if you want to do a quiz on this, go to our website at www. engvid. com.

因此,如果你想考试本课的内容,请登录我们的网站 www. engvid. com.

And all the best with your essay.You can do it.Lots of ways to do it.

我祝你在写作中一切顺利。你可以的。方法有很多。

Check out some other videos also that talk about ways you can do well, but this is definitely one way, by improving your vocabulary.All the best to you.

你可以订阅其他视频课程来提高你的写作水平,但是提高你的词汇量确实是一种方法。祝你一切顺利。


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1 \全球化的影响

There is a disagreement on the impact of increased business and culture contact between countries on a country 's identity. What is your opinion?

2 、政府投资

People should keep all the money they earn and should not pay taxes to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

3、科技的影响

Many employees may work at home with modern technology. Some people claim that it benefits only workers, but not employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

4、文化

i. It is more important for a building to serve its purposes than to look beautiful. Architects do not need to worry about whether it is a real work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

ii. The international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. To what extent do you think its advantages far outweigh its disadvantages?

5、生活和工作

Some people think that changing jobs periodically is good. What is your opinion?

6 、媒体

Some people suggest that there should be restrictions on a detailed description of crimes in the newspapers and on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

7 、广告

There are many advertisements directed at children. Parents argue that children are misled, while advertisers consider advertising a source of useful information. What is your opinion?

8、环境

It is said that the best way to solve the world 's environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

9、动物

Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have noticed this problem for a long time. Why have people failed to improve this situation? What are your suggestions?

10 、教育

i. Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them. Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special courses. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

ii. Today, more school leavers are unable to find jobs. Discuss the causes of rising unemployment among young adults and suggest any solutions.

以上 10 个托福写作题目你看了吗?托福写作需要从哪些方面去分析问题,还要多学习,多思考。作文题的一部分是考试中词语的运用,而考试的很大一部分是写作思路和逻辑思维, 写一篇最好、最有思想的文章,需要用多种方式思考。


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