雅思9分范文如何写?

雅思9分范文如何写?

雅思9分范文

题型

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s.

参照范文:

The main factors responsible for the decreased productivity of agricultural land in North America, Europe, and Oceania during the 1990s were summarized in a pie chart and a table.

the most serious problem was over-grazing. It has caused the world to lose 35% of agriculture land. This problem is followed closely by deforestation and over-cultivation.

The area that has lost most proportion of its agriculture land was Europe at 23% However, Oceania and North America was not as badly affected, losing 13% and 5% of its farmland respectively.

Surprisingly, the main problem faced by each area is different from one another. The problem with over-grazing is especially serious in Oceania, resulting in 11.3% of its land unsuitable for agriculture. On the other hand, deforestation that caused 9.8% of agriculture land unusable was the major problem faced by the European farmers. Although over-cultivation was the primary threat in North America, it was not a problem at all in Oceania.

In conclusion, over-grazing was the main cause of worldwide degradation in 1990s. Europe’s percentage of degradation was largest of all three regions and all three regions had different predominant causes.

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发表于 2020-01-25

雅思小作文9分范文

题型

温度与降雨

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

范文:

The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.

It is noticeable that monthly figures for precipitation in Kolkata vary considerably, whereas monthly temperatures remain relatively stable. Rainfall is highest from July to August, while temperatures are highest in April and May.

Between the months of January and May, average temperatures in Kolkata rise from their lowest point at around 20°C to a peak of just over 30°C. Average rainfall in the city also rises over the same period, from approximately 20mm of rain in January to 100mm in May.

While temperatures stay roughly the same for the next four months, the amount of rainfall more than doubles between May and June. Figures for precipitation remain above 250mm from June to September, peaking at around 330mm in July. The final three months of the year see a dramatic fall in precipitation, to a low of about 10mm in December, and a steady drop in temperatures back to the January average.

发表于 2020-01-25

雅思优秀范文如何写?

Q1.

Coherence and Cohesion 的差别?

Coherence:有效的逻辑;句间逻辑有效且语段区划清楚

Cohesion:合理的归纳;衔接词

Coherence-logically-written

Cohesion-well-structured

Coherence and Cohesion-easy to follow

Q2.

行文构造如何保证衔接和衔接性更强,有哪些新奇的行文构造?

行文构造一般依照总-分-总构造开展,反映一定的多样性;除此之外,要和 position 想切合.

Q3.

评委范例中常常全文的阐述全是中心句+表述,没有的事例.那样的书写可用吗?

举个例子就是说常说的“例证法”,归属于阐述手法之中的一种,当中心句明确提出一个见解以后,假如后边的表述能切合题型地把逻辑线说清晰,论述方式上能够 采用一定的协调能力,不一定要得出显著的事例.

Q4.

大优秀作文衔接方式,怎样提升逻辑性?

一般而言提高逻辑的方法是应用一些连接词,例如 in addition,furthermore,however 等,还可以应用代词粘连的方法,例如 it,this,such 等;更高級的手法就是说根据词的反复(同义替换成)来显示信息语句中间的逻辑性.

Q5.

大优秀作文中,“妥协段”是不是要提升一个针对本段的一个“反驳”来显出趋向的见解?

立反-论反-驳反

根据反驳促使全文见解更为明确,进而使其考虑评定标准 TR 中:Present a clear position throughout the response.

反驳的方式 :

(1)解决困难:表明难题能被摆脱,最好是简易明确提出解决方案;

(2)争锋相对:立即强调反方的缺点.

发表于 2020-01-25
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