雅思写作怎样分段?

雅思写作怎样分段?

雅思写作怎样分段?

雅思大作文里面有几个段落?

分段实际上是雅思考官在雅思大作文内的一个判分点.大优秀作文“连贯性与对接”(也就是说人们常说的CC)这一规定占了全部优秀作文判分规范的四分之一,换句话说有25%的得分规定学生可以有效分段和训练句与句相互关系.详尽规定能够查询雅思写作评定标准.

无论哪些话题讨论的大优秀作文都规定有详细介绍段(Introduction)和总环节(Conclusion),这就占了2个段落了.而大优秀作文的主体段(body)也得依据不一样的状况文章内容来源于麦考瑞雅思考试开展分段(一般会有两到三个段落).这一共总有了四到五个段落了.

主体段我可以写出一个段落吗?

很缺憾,不可以只写一段.大优秀作文中有一个规定就是说调查涮羊肉们有对不一样主体段的分段工作能力.假如你要在CC一部分取得7这一成绩得话,你务必得将主体段分段,并且每一主体段要有自身的管理中心观点及其支撑点管理中心观点的论点论据.假如把你全部的点都放到了一个段落里边,那麼你的成绩毫无疑问不容易很高.

问题来了,我能有四到五个主题风格段吗?

一般不提议那么干!要取得高分数雅思写作代表你一直在大优秀作文里面要可以充足扩展你的观点.你想一想,当你分了四到五个主体段,这代表你可以表明四到五个关键观点,那麼企业時间内你不大可能充足将其每一主体段的观点扩展起来.这样一来,你的CC成绩对比以前又会降下去了.

那究竟雅思大作文主体一部分是多少个段落为好呢?

要想可以有充足時间充足扩展并机构你要的观点,麦考瑞网编提议两到三个段落是最好是的.比如说给你2个主体一部分,那麼你一直在下笔以前的两三分钟内是彻底可以搞出一个好看的大纲出去的.自然,这一并不等于人们临考就定下了,上考试场就一定写2个主体段落.由于,不一样的话题讨论和与你对这一话题讨论的构思念头并不是一成不变的,因此出场见到题型仔细观察以后就能够做决策了.雅思写作模版.

你和雅思的故事 - Go Hard or Go Home

发表于 2020-01-11

雅思6分优秀作文是怎样的?

题型:

Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

分析:

本题问究竟该挑选哪些工作,究竟是自身很感兴趣的工作关键,還是平稳的工作关键?与别的许多 话题讨论一样,这儿的探讨能够繁杂,还可以简易;能够刻骨铭心化,还可以情境创设.例如,许多人觉得,应当挑选自身很感兴趣的工作,由于那样才可以保持人生价值,从工作中找寻到满足感和成就感;而挑选平稳的工作则能够有利于社会发展的平稳,有利于家中的和谐.老雅此次要为低分段同学们出示一个范例,看6按段优秀作文到底能够把一个话题讨论简单到何种程度.

6分范例

Everybody has to work. The question is:which is more important in work, the job security or the job satisfaction? Some people think the job security is more important than job satisfaction, but others believe the opposite. In my view, both job security and satisfaction are important.

评价:本段为开始段,最先提出话题讨论,次之重述话题讨论,再度提出自身见解.

We all need a secure job. If we have a stable job, we can make a lot of money. Then we can buy big houses and expensive cars, and can travel all around the world. This will make our life more wonderful. If we have a stable job, we will not have to worry about losing our job. So we do not have to spend time looking for jobs. This means we can have more time to stay together with our family.

评价:本段论述“job security"的必要性.提出2个原因:1)假如有平稳工作,人们能够赚到许多 钱.怎样论述这一分论点论据呢?老雅提出的”当然延续法“能够充分发挥.赚到钱后人们能够买房和车,能够到世界旅游,那样我们的日常生活就多种多样了.2) 假如有平稳工作,人们就无须担忧丧失工作.当然延续下来,不担忧丧失工作,就多余花時间去找工作,結果呢,人们总有時间守候亲人了.那样,用”当然延续法“,2个原因都获得了一定的论述,层级十分清晰,一句句写来,搞清楚准确无误.

However, it is also important to have an interesting job. If we have an interesting job, we can do our job well. Then we can get happiness from our job. If we are not interested in what we do, we can never succeed no matter how stable our job is. My uncle James is a good example. He is a middle school teacher, which is a very stable job. However, he is not really interested in teaching. As a result, he is not very successful even at his fifties.

评价:本段论述"job satisfaction"的必要性.提出一点原因:假如有自身很感兴趣的工作,人们就能搞好工作.当然延续下来,搞好工作,人们就能从工作中获得幸福快乐.相反,假如对自身从业的工作不喜欢,人们就不可以取得成功.接下去,举例论证.是我一位大伯在初中当教师,工作是平稳了,但他对课堂教学不喜欢,結果到50几岁還是失败.这儿应用的還是比较简单立即的论述方式.

In conclusion, I think it is the best that we have a secure and satisfying job, because this kind of job helps us to make our living and have time to stay together with our family, and at the same time succeed in our career. I wish everybody could get such a job. (271 words)

评价:依据段,最先严格执行自身的见解,并将上文的见解再次描述一下,最终提出自身的希望,完毕全篇.

整体点评:文中防止了讲道理,防止了抽象性,保证了简易而清楚,立即而晓畅.尽管逻辑思维稍显孩子气,語言也是许多反复生涩的地区,但把自身的观念说清晰了,因而非常容易获得6分.假如英语水准太低的学员,尝试很刻骨铭心地去写这一题型,語言苟延残喘,逻辑性错乱不堪入目,即应用出了好多个长尾词,其結果依然是4分.低分段学员,一定要把握恰当的逻辑思维方式和写作技巧,不必轻信外边说白了创作优秀教师的雅思机经,哪些用长尾词,用繁杂句,写刻骨铭心一些,这种尽管非常好,但确实不宜你.低分段同学们不能不小心!

发表于 2020-01-11
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