雅思写作怎样才能得到高分数?

雅思写作怎样才能得到高分数?

雅思考试经验总结

雅思写作始终是许多大学生的难点.不容易写,写偏题,篇幅不足用.那麼这种难题该怎样解决,雅思写作怎样得到高分数呢?记诵范文行吗?

雅思作文通常能够分成下列5种题目:

1、愿意是否

2、优缺点剖析

3、多边探讨

4、解决困难

5、综合性难题

不一样种类的主题风格创作架构会大不一样,但综上所述,人们能够将他们分成3个一部分: 刚开始、关键和完毕.我们一起以本文为例,看一下怎么使用 Simon 评委的优秀作文在创作中得到了高分数.

主题风格:

When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 在挑选工作中时,工资是最关键的考虑到要素.你愿意吗?

Sample:

Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when people decide on a career, because I believe that other factors are equally important. On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a family. Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference to workers 'levels of happiness and general quality of life. Secondly, many people 's feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society. In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect people 's choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators.

构造:

针对了解意见与建议的难题,人们能够看见 Simon 老师一般 选用4段式的创作构造: 首段表达本人的见解, 正中间的2个关键章节目录得出了见解争执的实际缘故,末尾语段再度严格执行了自身的见解. 实际上,它不但适用准许的种类,也适用别的种类的主题风格.Simon 老师常常选用这类4段式.比如,针对多边探讨种类,疑难问题 “.discuss both views and give your own opinion ”.题型规定人们得出彼此的见解,得出自身的见解.随后,人们的文章内容能够由这4个一部分构成: 刚开始的话题讨论详细介绍,另一方见解的探讨, 探讨了另一方的见解,并在最终开展了小结.因而,根据对主考官范文逻辑性构造的剖析,人们能够学习培训到恰当的文章体裁,把握每类别难题的恰当创作构思.那样,如果你碰到不一样种类的题型时,还可以恰当、系统化机构不一样种类题型的文章体裁.

內容:

假如构造是自己的骨架图,那麼內容如同1个人的灵魂相同.丰富多彩而丰富的內容,是1个要探寻的栩栩如生的生命.假如人们想我们一起的文章内容有生命,那麼內容必须要丰富全方位,可以对于题型中出現的难题,明确提出充足的、全方位的,可以对题型中出現的难题作出有效、充足地展现.人们也以这篇有关薪水的优秀作文为例,在优秀作文中挑选岗位的那时候,在挑选工作中的那时候,薪水并非最关键的考虑到要素,在挑选岗位的那时候,薪水随后在刚开始的语段中,你最先必须确立你的见解: 愿意、不愿意或一部分愿意.在关键一部分,人们将根据确立和有机构的争辩来证实这一点儿并证实人们的见解.在第一位关键语段中,Simon 最先从1个侧边证实了他的见解: 考虑大家的基础要求要钱.接下去,根据举例说明、比照等方法对主题风格句开展详尽的解读.下一个关键一部分展现了为何别的要素一样关键.Simon 这里,人们根据3点确立了论点论据.见解确立,事实论据充足,机构确立. 许多大学生通常都能掌握文章内容的总体构造,但因此內容机构不善,或是过度片面性.人们能够根据 Simon 教师作文剖析文章内容的构造和思维逻辑,进而学好把握恰当的写作技巧.

語言:

在雅思写作评定标准中,语汇和英语的语法的多元性和精确性是优秀作文的几大考核标准,因此社交能力都是小伙伴们主要表现的1个关键层面.许多大学生的创作考试成绩并不是一直被谈及.由此可见,一大部分是语言表达能力的缺少,如用语不精确、语法难题、中文的英文表述等.必须留意的是,创作高分数并不是绮丽语汇的积淀,也并不是繁杂句式的融合.盲目跟风追求完美语汇或句式的升級,并不意味着你能得到高分数.因而,难词长句并不是人们应当追求完美的.简约精确的语言表达能力,是人们提升写作水平的恰当方式.

首段,首句 Simon 用简易的一段话详细介绍题型: Many people choose their jobs based on the size of

the salary offered. 简洁明了,开点.接下去,确立你的本人观点: Personally, I disagree with the idea.在主节中,人们最先能够看见,文字中应用了许多对接成份,促使语言表达能力顺畅连贯性,比如,如语言表达能力顺畅连贯性,比如,如: 文字中应用了 example,nevertheless 这些.许多同学们忽视了对接词的应用,可是要了解词义连贯性对人们总体的表述是十分关键的,都是雅思写作的一整评定标准.次之,灵便变化多端的句子成分都是1个最该学习培训的地区.许多大学生因此较为喜爱用某几句构造,不清楚该如何设置.好文章在句式的灵便表述上必须要精确.如第四段主题风格句: I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs, 应用 that 精确表述你的见解 -- 钱是务必的.接下去,表述为何钱很关键.最先以1个简易的语句为例,随后用各种各样复合句或虚条件句开展实际的表述.一样,第三段的首段也应用了另一半从句来表明见解,并应用了较为句式.

as important as.在末尾一部分,用一段话做1个简易的小结,映衬打头的见解.措辞精确灵便,如 outweign, motivator 含意精确; 句式多种多样, 一起应用 while 和 that 具体指导的另一半子句. 这里,人们从內容、构造和語言3个层面来剖析本文.一样,针对不一样的优秀作文,人们还可以从这种层面开展剖析,掌握创作步聚,学习培训她们的写作方法和语言表达能力,在考试时获得高分数.


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