雅思作文应该如何写? (1)

雅思作文应该如何写? (1)

                                                     雅思考试经验总结

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

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To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed. I would like to begin by pointing out that ‘traditional skills and ways of life’ are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community.

the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the: the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the Internet, we have been moving on from previous ways of doing things. Some the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the Internet, we have been moving on from previous ways of doing things. Some Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or Interestingly, technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of Interestingly, technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of

longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life. Surely, few people by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to islands are too small to have normal schools. Rather than breaking up families modern refrigeration techniques, are being used to keep alive the traditional anywhere in the world. by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to think is by no means ; islands are too small to have normal schools. Rather than breaking up families In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I

anywhere in the world. pointless‘think is by no means ’; a think is by no means with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend

题型

life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. modern refrigeration techniques, are being used to keep alive the traditional

traditional skills and ways of

见到这一题型,简直既简易又蒙蔽,关键所在针对country)的了解,a country, technology, to try and keep能够有几种了解方法,it it并且每个能够说得过去, 第一类 (when a country develops It: 当1个國家发展趋势高新科技,那麼传统式的技术性和生活方法消退了,那麼國家对维持传统式的技术性和生活方法是无实际意义的. 第二类 :当1个國家发展趋势高新科技,那麼传统式的技术性和生活方法消退了,那麼技术性对维持传统式的技术性和生活方法是无实际意义的. 三种 :当1个國家发展趋势高新科技,那麼传统式的技术性和生活方法消退了,维持传统式的技术性和生活方法是无实际意义的.Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed.的返指,也就是说代指前边的句子成分通常必须从英语的语法和含意上去判断,可是从英语的语法和含左右而言,几种表述全是能够的.稿子创作者选用了第二类表述.

打头段

_I would like to begin by pointing out that _

开门见山,立即说明创作者的见解.太直接了,剑桥系列产品之后出的评委范文愈来愈委婉了.

life‘life with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend’ the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the

are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community.这句用第一人称视角,稍看起来有点儿口语化,我觉得除开说明自身见解以外,只出現第三人称比较合适

a country, technology, to try and keep等于强调to a country, technology, to try and keep would seek to preserve such traditions as living in caves!这类说法就是说不正确的,由于传统式技术性和生活方法是归属于三明一中文化艺术或人群 ,而并不是归属于1个國家,out表达隶属关系

行为主体每段

a country, technology, to try and keep: the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the when a country develops longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life. Surely, few people

“在许多层面,文化史我觉得就是说技术史”,好有生活哲理的一段话

help…Internet, we have been moving on from previous ways of doing things.…negative impact ….看起来很有质感

would seek to preserve such traditions as living in caves!用的是如今进行完成时,表达从以往刚开始到如今始终开展的姿势,主要表现出这种姿势的延续性

impact. Some technologies, such as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative

强调技术性的不太好层面

and support our way of life.+ impact.具备某类特点

traditional skills and ways of life. would seek to preserve such traditions as living in caves! Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or

表明了技术进步的对人们的益处,而且刻意强调了internet为下每段的表明奠定基础

行为主体二段

For example, the populations of some islands are too small to have normal impact.

我觉得都是上每段的schools. Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland,的同义表述,contribute to相匹配了help

Interestingly, technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of help In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I help

举例子,to针对维护保养海岛的传统式家中的功效

pointless: 表达这种挑选或较为等

In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being这里的In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being表达这种方法

Deliver schooling online way of life.; ordered from, and delivered to, anywhere in the world. produce salmon

举例子,技术性对传统式In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being此项传统式专业技能的维持

末尾段

Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or produce salmon‘We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our’; {九十余} necessarily [adv]

一段话,小结了行为主体每段的2个见解,技术性并不是都好,但在一些层面确实能维持传统式的存有.

In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being: 必然

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and毫无疑问

way of life. When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and

填补了几句,表述了对In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being的好感度

复原创作者创作步骤?

立意: technology When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and 它是个有模棱两可的题型,而创作者选用的将{150}代指麦考瑞选用的见解是彻底抵制,见解就是说技术性有所不同,并且有的技术性还能维持传统式技艺和生活方法.

架构

打头段: 这篇文书创作者也不足委婉的了.一上去就强调不愿意这一见解.并且就明确提出了traditional skills and ways of life die when a country its technology, the out这一出题是找不到的,由于传统式技艺和生活方法和國家没事儿,只文化或小区相关,也就是说传统式技艺和生活方法是这种文化艺术,并非这种政冶质粒载体.这类观点确实得必须有点儿背景图专业知识.

行为主体每段 :这些叙述技术性的不良影响,有好也是坏.不足先得强调文化艺术发展趋势和技术性发展趋势的关联.题型提及3个叙述另一半:國家,技术性和传统式生活习惯,打头段创作者最先将國家与技术性和传统式生活习惯的关联抛下了,而代之以文化艺术、技术性和传统式生活习惯的关联.因此首句话就是说文明行为就是说技术史,而技术性发展趋势就是说原先办事的方法的更改(也就是说传统式技艺和生活方法),一段话就再次精准定位了文化艺术、技术性和传统式方法之间的关系.随后又详细描述了技术性发展趋势对文明行为发展趋势的双向功效,举例子,规模性性破坏力武器装备危害人们;医药学发展趋势有益于人们发展.总成绩的构造方法.

行为主体二段:

技术性针对储存传统式技艺和生活方法的奉献,这一出题提及了2个另一半,传统式技艺和传统式生活习惯,那麼举2个事例各自表明这一难题.传统式生活习惯:海岛上的小孩能够根据网络教学,无需离去家,因此维持了传统式家中的详细;传统式技艺:互联网技术和电冰箱的应用能使传统式制做大马哈鱼的技艺储存.总成绩的构造方法. 末尾段: 将行为主体每段梳理一下下:传统式技艺层面:并非说全部技术性全是好的,可是在一些层面对维持传统式技艺和還是有益的.生活习惯层面:人们不理应忽略技术性,技术性是人们的盆友,而且适用了社会生活方法.

遣词造句:

传统式技艺 :previous ways of doing things; traditional skills and ways of life die

发展趋势: previous ways of doing things; out

储存 ;…support; traditional skills and ways of life die


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发表于 2019-08-05

                                                  雅思考试经验总结

我觉得在雅思写作中,要想写好一段文字的骨架图,想要保证有血有肉,在聊天的时候有东西可以说,则要靠很多的见解语料的收集整理.

Someone think that robots are very important to humans' future development. Others thought that they are dangerous and have negative effects on the society. Discuss the advantages of disadvantages of the robots.

许多人觉得智能机器人针对人类的未来很关键,许多人觉得智能机器人很风险,针对社会发展有不良影响,探讨智能机器人的优缺点?

评价:本题一起合适创作雅思考试题型:高新科技针对人们和社会发展的危害.

优缺点探讨类提出问题标示:

…… discuss the advantages of disadvantages. 探讨其优缺点

弊大于利布局图:

段首:背景图详细介绍 + 异议聚焦 + 文学家观点

二段:3个利好消息进行及其关键点和事实论据的适用

几段:两个缺点进行及其关键点和事实论据的适用

尾段:再度点名见解 + 小结原因

文学家观点:智能机器人的应用是弊大于利.

构思扩展:

服务机器人利好消息的进行:

1. 智能机器人能够替代人做许多风险的或是反复的工作中,这就节约了人力资源,大家能够从业别的层面的工作中. 比如,能够运用智能机器人去深海探险或是太空探索.

2. 公司中运用智能机器人能够提高效率,造就大量的经济发展使用价值.比如,新春期内,许多餐馆出現招工难,一间成都火锅加盟店就购买了智能机器人服务员,智能机器人不仅节约了人工成本,减轻了劳动力的工作压力,更为变成吸引住消费者的一条景色.能够想像,智能机器人在将来的公司发展上将会饰演更为关键的人物角色.

智能化设备缺点的进行:

1. 假如大家多度地依靠智能机器人,那麼这会造成人的想像力,协调能力及其自觉性的降低.比如,许多传统式的手工艺品将会会渐渐地消退.

2. 智能机器人的普及化会使一些人下岗.更槽糕的是,针对智能机器人的放任有将会使他们变成世界最优秀的战事武器装备.

语料库:

1. robot=mechanical person n智能机器人

2. artificial intelligence n 人工智能技术

3. Many industries are increasingly making use of the robots. 许多工业生产很多地应用智能机器人.

4. …… can enhance the efficiency of work and generate more economic value v…… 能够提高效率及其造就大量的经济发展使用价值.

5. be involved in v be involved in v 智能机器人能够替代人做许多风险的反复的工作中,这就节约了人力资源,能够使大家从业别的层面的工作中.

分析:Too much reliance on the robots will contribute to people做……

6. be involved in v’Too much reliance on the robots will contribute to people creativity, flexibility and self-motivation 过多依靠智能机器人会造成人的想像力,协调能力及其自觉性的降低.

扩展:motivation -motivation. = The popularity of robots may take the bread out of some people自觉性

7. Many traditional crafts might be substituted by the robots in the future. 在将来,许多传统式的技艺将会被智能机器人取代.

8. take the bread out of one’advanced war weapon in the world. 智能机器人的普及化会使一些人下岗.

分析:The popularity of robots may take the bread out of some people’The invention of the robot has greatly revolutionized people抢了别人的瓷碗

9. Many traditional crafts might be substituted by the robots in the future. even worse 更槽糕的是,针对智能机器人的放任或许会使他们变成世界最优秀的战事武器装备.

分析:advanced war weapon in the world.更为槽糕的是

12. s life in’The invention of the robot has greatly revolutionized people s life, yet, its drawbacks should be stressed.智能机器人的创造发明,在许多层面,巨大地更改了大家的衣食住行.

扩展:The invention of the robot has greatly revolutionized people= invention 创造发明

12. without reaching any…… take the bread out of one perform a task 大家始终在异议……的优缺点,沒有达成协议.

扩展:bring huge convenience to = The availability of the robot has really brought huge convenience to始终见解

13. consensus n consensus n’purchased a robot servant. The robot not only effectively reduced the 智能机器人给大家的衣食住行产生了极大的便捷,可是,其缺点应当被注重.

分析:Robots have entered many offices or restaurants to help people to perform……,给……产生极大的便捷

12. various tasks, thus , it is likely that people could enjoy more leisure time. thus,it is likely that 智能机器人早已进到了许多公司办公室或是餐馆去协助大家做许多的工作中,因而,大家能够享有到更长的休闲娱乐岁月.

分析:undertake a task ……因而,极有可能……

扩展:undertake a task = invention = However,some problems might inevitably ensue. 做这项工作中

13. take a task v 官方网考试真题The availability of the robot has really brought huge convenience to the science fiction movies. The availability of the robot has really brought huge convenience to potential demerits of scenery. Millions of customers deliberately ate in this restaurant to feel 比如,在尤其是在过节期间,一间成都火锅加盟店购买一名工业机器人服务员,智能机器人不仅合理地减轻了人力资本紧缺的工作压力,并且变成一条与众不同的风景.许多的消费者刻意来这个餐饮店用餐,目地就是说以便体会智能机器人服务员产生的神秘感.

分析:The availability of the robot has really brought huge convenience to有意地

15. However,some problems might inevitably ensue. 大家智能化能够协助大家杜绝繁杂的工作中.

18. purchased a robot servant. The robot not only effectively reduced the殊不知,某些难题或许必然性地跟随产生.

扩展:prevent misdeeds of human beings.= {73}必然性地

18. inevitably As for the potential demerits of robots, moral education and law智能机器人兵士将会会造成错乱,就好像人们在科幻片中见到的相同.

分析:potential demerits of 栩栩如生地

16. edged sword,which can be used for equally good or-The robot is a double contrivance n智能机器人是一柄两面性,有好有坏.

21. edged sword,which can be used for equally good orpossible demerits as long as we can use them properly. potential demerits of 置于智能机器人的缺点,道德教育和法律法规的约束力应当被倡导,去标准智能机器人的应用,去防止人们的刑事犯罪.

分析:restrictions should be advocated to regulate the use of the robot and to……,……的潜在性的缺点


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