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2016年11月5日雅思写作真题分析

日期:2016-12-07| 阅读(659)[来源:麦考瑞雅思]

关于dependence的问题最近几年是雅思写作考试里喜欢出的一个细分点,主要讨论现代社会中人际关系、人的价值选择和生活方式会受什么影响,会导致什么现象和后果。类似的考题还有:

Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(详情见下图强化综合训练手册P28页)这道题与11月5日的雅思考试题几乎没有区别,麦考瑞雅思的summary大强度训练早就囊括了20种雅思写作易出题点,每个月至少有三场雅思考试会原题重现或者近似题出现在麦考瑞综合训练手册中。认真跟做、复述的同学有至少75%的几率会遇到自己准备过的写作话题。

 

11月5日雅思考试原题分析和考点发散

                                                                                                               

作者:麦考瑞雅思       焦若男老师

Some people think individuals are more and more dependent on each other. Some people think individuals are more and more independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

题目结构:Two sides+ Discuss(辩论型题目)

Keywords: dependence or independence(社会类)

Analysis:

一. 本题目矛盾点为“个体在变得更加依赖彼此还是更加独立”,是一个给出矛盾双方观点的题目。需要注意的是,该题目的问题要求“discuss both views and give your opinion”,考生在答题的时候必须要注意对矛盾双方的观点都必须进行较为充分的讨论,可对自己的倾向的一方观点分布较多篇幅的讨论内容。对于考生,如果考虑到自己语言把控能力的欠缺,建议在开头段亮明自己的观点,结尾总结归纳自己的观点。

 

二. 问题:Whether individuals are increasingly independent.

以下对双方观点的论证从宏观角度入手,即全球的经济生活方面个体之间的相互依赖,而非日常生活中人的相互依赖。在当今的全球经济生活中,高度的国际分工使得人们之间需要高度协作,不同的生产环节共同组成一个完整的生产链,各个生产环节的工人以来彼此的存在谋生。而另一方面,技术的进步使得过去需要大量协作的工作变得在机器的帮助下,一个人就能完成,降低了工人之间的彼此依赖度。—— 从宏观层面着手也能规避很多雅思考生老生常谈的“生活压力大, 迁徙频繁,生活习惯改变”等旧观点,让考官眼前一亮。

 

Body 1: Those who held that individuals are becoming increasingly reliant on each other offer the following reasons. In this world with high degree of division of labor, people need each other as one unique part of the production chain to ensure the economy goes on smoothly. Take the production of car for example. The rubber is collected in southeastern Asia and then delivered to other places to be made into tires and eventually installed onto a car. The workers taking part in this process depend on one another to survive in this world. (举例论证)

Body 2:On the other hand, people in favor of the independence idea is not groundless. Our lifestyle as the most intelligent creature in this planet has been tremendously transformed in the past century. It’s obvious that a substantial amount of jobs which used to take several people to finish are now perfectly completed with the assistance of technology, no cooperation required. This development has, undoubtedly, significantly reduced the reliance on each other.

 

从篇幅来看,Body 1的观点论证(个体变得愈加依赖彼此)篇幅大于Body 2的观点论证(个体变得愈加独立),因此作者在思想上应该是倾向于前者的观点,故此在conclusion中,应当再次重申自己倾向的观点。

Conclusion:Personally, the highly connected and intertwined links of economic production indicate that individuals are only going to be more dependent on each other day by day. It is inevitable that the momentum of interconnection continues to be maintained.

 

三. 语言亮点:

1.贴近话题用词:division of labor, production chain, rubber, technology, cooperation, southeastern Asia

2.描绘性词汇:increasingly, unique, smoothly, eventually, substantial, tremendously, significantly

3.语法亮点:

分词作状语:It’s obvious that a substantial amount of jobs which used to take several people to finish are now perfectly completed with the assistance of technology, no cooperation required.

插入语:This development has, undoubtedly, significantly reduced the reliance on each other.

强调句+ 定语从句:It’s obvious that a substantial amount of jobs which used to take several people to finish are now perfectly completed with the assistance of technology, no cooperation required.

被动语态:The rubber is collected in southeastern Asia and then delivered to other places to be made into tires and eventually installed onto a car.

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